My Chinese Poem: 寒潭望春

有心栽花花不开
肥田树枯水月寒
春去秋来时景迁
秋水难留又一梦
明月看似冬无限
鸳鸯寒潭望春临

I must be watching too much TVB period drama to come up with something like that. Feel free to correct my chinese poem.
Have a great weekend.